ISO/IEC JTC1/SC22/WG5/N1461

Subject:  Comments arising from subgroup review of Section 14
To:       WG5
From:     Van Snyder
Date:     1 August 2001

The following concerns arose from reviewing Section 14.

Although subgroup has given some attention to each of these concerns,
there has not been time to give them all of the attention that they may
need.  Therefore, the revisions proposed below may not actually be
practical.

Generally, exposition would be improved if the three modules were
treated separately.

At [333:34-40] it would be useful to insert a note showing an example of
how or why things would be slower.

At [335:6-8] explain what "not exact" means.

At [340:2] The phrase "given in a paragraph" could refer to another
section or another document.  Make it clear that the note refers to
paragraphs below labelled "restriction".

At [344:15] "X" => "1.0".  Provide an example with Y an infinity.

At [351:29] "The value of" => "Its value".

Subclause 14.10 should be in Annex C.