ISO/IEC JTC1/SC22/WG5/N1831
To: WG5
From: Malcolm Cohen
Subject: Responses to requests from ISO Secretariat
Date: 2010/06/04


A. Introduction

This paper lists the requests recently received from ISO Secretariat,
together with the action taken to correct the problem.


B. List of items and responses

1. Correct roman page numbering so that the Contents begins on page iii.

   Done.

2. Foreword, paragraph 6, third line: Change "and Technical" to "and the
   Technical".

   Done.

3. Pages 40, 244, 438, 458, 466, 530, 584: Insert the text "(Blank page)"
   in the centre of the page.

   Done (automatically by changing the page-skipping macro).

4. Pages 585 onwards: Add the ISO/IEC copyright footer to each page.

   Done.

5. Definitions 1.3.22, 1.3.23, 1.3.24, 1.3.25, 1.3.33.4, 1.3.76, 1.3.80:
   Delete the article (the/a) from the beginning of the definition.

   Done.

6. If possible without affecting layout of subsequent pages, move the
   widowed lines at the top of the following pages to the previous page:
  28,
   Done.
  66,
   Done, and let the knock-on affecting subsequent pages stand, as it
   improved many pages without disimproving others, up until page 84.
   Page 85 shortened to curtail the knock-on at that point.
  70,
   Fixed by knock-on from 66.
  81,
   Fixed by knock-on from 66.
 141,
   Done (no knock-on).
 160,
   Done (one line knock-on for one page, no problem).
 288,
   Done, and let the knock-on stand for several pages (up to 299) as
   it improved them.
 303,
   Done (removed the knock-on, p303 is now a bit short).
 358,
   Done (no knock-on).
 427,
   Done (removed knock-on).
 429,
   Done (removed knock-on).
 Corrected Instruction: (move line from top of 433 to bottom of 432)
   Done (no knock-on).
 443,
   Done (knock-on up to 457, improves several pages in particular 447 and
         454, page 452 is a bit short).
 Corrected Instruction (move line from top of 475 to 474)
   Done (knock-on up to 482, plus removed excess vertical space improves
         475, 478 is a bit short, 480 is improved).
 494,
   Done (one page of knock-on, no problem).
 508,
   Done (fixed knock-on - page 508 slightly short).
 538, 539, 554, 557.
   This annex is mechanically generated from the normative text, so it would 
   be difficult to do this.  Since it is only an annex, I recommend accepting 
   the suboptimal typesetting.

7. If possible without affecting layout of subsequent pages, move the
   orphaned lines at the bottom of the following pages to the next page:
 105,
   Done (no knock-on).
 171,
   Done (no knock-on).
 174,
   Done (no knock-on).
 202,
   Done (no knock-on).
 219,
  Done (knock-on to 223, no problem).
 220,
  Fixed by knock-on from 219.
 221,
  Fixed by knock-on from 219.
 225,
  Done (no knock-on).
 265,
  Done (no knock-on).
 293,
  Instead, moved the top line earlier to 292.
  Knock-on, fixed at 299.
 304,
  Done (p304 is shorter than before.
        Knock-on all the way to 314, no problem though.)
 394,
  Done (no knock-on).
 432,
  Incorrect instruction (see above).
 450,
  Fixed by knock-on from 443.
 474,
  Incorrect instruction (see above).
 528,
  Done (no knock-on, but 528 is very short).
 560.
   This annex is mechanically generated from the normative text, so it would 
   be difficult to do this.  Since it is only an annex, I recommend accepting 
   the suboptimal typesetting.


C. Additional changes

On page 182, removed extraneous whitespace.